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Just a poem that I wrote in support of the LGBT community, and as you can tell, this particular poem is centered around girl-to-girl love and romance! But this could also apply to anyone out there in the LGBT community! :hug:

I just wanted to show my support to the LGBT community and say that I respect all of you for who you are, and you people make dang cute couples, haha! :heart:

(ALL Rights Reserved To SweetAndEvilMWHAHAHA)
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~Bullcross May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Again I return to one of my favourite poems... This is a great piece of expressionistic literature. I wish it was directed straight to ... you know... normal ... relationship
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=TheInkheart May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww, thank you so much! :hug: I am so happy that you like it that much, it means a lot to me! :heart: And I was actually thinking about making a different poem about straight relationships, so I just might do that! :D
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~Bullcross May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, please do!
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I really like the boldness and style Display of this poem.
It's simple yet has much depth to it.
I really like it. :D
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=TheInkheart Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! I was going for boldness and style! ;)
And I am glad that I displayed the depth of it, I wanted to do that! :D
Aww, and good! :aww: Thank you so much! :hug:
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!ZephyrFlyer Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing! I love it so much!! Oh and my friend who is a lesbian says that this poem was amazing and she loves it too!
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=TheInkheart Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww, thank you so much! :hug: I am thinking about making an LGBT poetry collection, and I just might do that because of how many great comments I have gotten off of these poetry pieces! :D

Again, thank you so much and thank your friend for me, because it is nice to know that both of you liked it! :aww:
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~Bullcross Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I've seen some poets use a similar style. I like it a lot; they are mostly expressionists; this also sounds expressionistic (not sure if there is such a word)
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=TheInkheart Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much for the feedback! :hug: This is the first time that I have tried this style, using expressionism and a different text style! :D
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